Sunday, May 8, 2011

Writing Paper 4: How Are You A Writer?



A Partial Literacy Narrative: Perfect Imperfection

            Take out a clean, white piece a paper from your desk drawer and a sharp, smart pencil. Gather your thoughts, take a deep breath, and in the instant that the pencil touches the page for the first time, there. Magic happens. After hearing the question, “Why write?” I came up with another, “Why not?” For me, writing is a process. I write to clear my head and put all those jumbled-up thoughts onto paper. Then it is the paper’s responsibility to hold, keep, and translate my thoughts into words, my declarative sentences into bold structures, and my questions into the first steps towards a greater understanding. I write to be heard, to make my mark and know that somewhere, I have something etched in a metaphorical stone that will stand the test of time. I write to tell a story, or persuade an opinion. I write to impress my reader; I write to inspire, or to question those things I may not understand. I write to take on a challenge and try to make sense of it. Although my readers may, or may not understand the true weight of my words, they will try. They will try, as I will try, to push my writing towards perfection, if there even is such an aspiration. Yet, this proves to be too challenging at times, and more and more, I feel that I write for me. Honestly, what does it matter if someone judges, or doesn’t agree?

            After I complete a work, I wonder what you, my reader, think of me. What do you feel, taste, and desire after you have leafed through my pages? Against my better judgment I sometimes try to impress you too much. Yet, I am unlike Billy Collins, the author of “The Flight of the Reader.” I never would think that we could have too much of each other, you are not the annoying type. I agree that you are like the “cricket, or bluebird,” on my shoulder, because we do need each other. I need you to stay close and wonder about my metaphorical words. I know I can make no sense sometimes, or stay to conformed, so what do you see as you look on day after day? I perform and you look on, peering around the curtain, standing in the wings, watching and waiting for the next step. I fear that you may walk away and not be transfixed by my style. For what will I have if not the technique to fascinate you? Yet, I will continue day after day, hour after hour. Yet, do not feel like you are all I need, all I need is my imagination. You are not my crush, as you are for Collins, you are my inspiration.

            I remember when I was little; my dad was the storyteller in my family. He used to always tell me those stories of, "when he was a child….” One particular story I remember him telling me time and time again, was about he and his older brother, Paul. As typical older brothers do, my Uncle Paul dared my dad to climb a tall tree in their New Jersey backyard, to the very top. If he didn’t, my dad always said, he would be a "chicken." My dad did indeed climb to the top of that cherry tree, but when he reached the highest branch and looked down at his shocked brother, he saw the height, and lost his balance. He fell from the tree and landed on his arm, which broke. He always used to say that even though he broke his arm, and even though he fell, he proved to himself that he could do whatever he wished to.

As a young girl, I thought this was a wonderful, silly, inspiring story. Growing up, my dad always pushed me to climb to the top of the highest tree and do whatever I dreamt I wanted to do. I strived to be able to do whatever I desired, and to never be afraid to slip, fall, or get hurt, because I knew I could always pick myself up, dust myself off, and fix my mistakes. I learned that everyone falls sometimes, but what matters, is the decision to get back up. Falling is a process I encountered again as I learned how to write. Now I encounter it again everyday, each time I write a sentence.

A sentence starts out like a raindrop; the first one falling from that unfortunate cloud that just couldn't hold on any longer. It may splash down on someone's unsuspecting head and trigger an emotion from contempt to joy. One may cower and run from the truth, or indulge in the splashing of newly formed puddles. As the words continue, like the clouds rolling through the darkening sky, you look up, and it may not seem so bad after all. For no one has ever melted from raindrops, but many have slipped and fallen, but always have gotten back up. Hold your head high, they say to young children, don't fear thunderstorms. For thunderstorms are just those pieces of writing that you may not understand. Everyone, at any age, can always learn. I strive to write perfection, and who can blame me? I am only imperfection, as is my writing: perfect imperfection, a compilation of ever changing and expanding thoughts.

Sunday, April 24, 2011

Writing Essay 3: What is Happening to Writing?



From Print to Hypertext: A Discussion with Bolter
           
            Stemming back from the days where writing was literally etched in stone, to our fast paced and overly stimulating digital age, writing has continuously been changing. Writing will continue to change its space as technology evolves. This “writing space,” according to Jay David Bolter in his book Writing Space: Computers, Hypertext, and the Remediation of Print, is any literal space, or material that writing is acquainted with. Thinking back to the writing tablet, the papyrus roll, the scroll, to classic paper and pencil, to typing on computers, to the integration of the Internet and hypertext, we must ask ourselves if writing is the same as it once was. Has the true form of writing been lost in the fast paced digital age? What is happening to writing? A simple question; with no simple answer (Bolter).

            Bolter draws his readers back to the age of Socrates and Plato - a time period when epic poetry was recited orally and writing was rare and of great value and importance. He explains how the “Platonic hybrid” came to pass. This hybrid was a combination of oral performance, “including speeches and dramatic poetry,” and written forms of early prose. For example one such an author named Herodotus would use a technique called “ring composition” (Bolton 104). In this style of speech, the story would be first presented to the audience as a logical, linear plot line. Then it would digress into a series of subplots, or “interesting details.” The audience would be notified when the author would return to the original plotline. Bolter suggests that this way of speaking could be described as “a straight line with occasional digressive loops” (Bolter 104). This was a new form of writing, different from the classic forms already existing in the ancient world. In both fiction and nonfiction works, the audience was taken on a straight, definite path with a clear steady plot line. Plays and histories were also presented in a “step by step” fashion for the audience. This was not a time where the audience was to be confused by many subplots, or a weaving storyline. Yet, the world was changing and writing changed with it. Some poets of the ancient world began to publish and distribute some of their works. As more texts were written down in textual form, instead of being presented orally and remembered, information, stories, and histories could be looked up, researched, and passed on through the years. People were no longer required to remember this information through word of mouth, they could use the written texts as a tool for study. For the most part however, these texts as they grew more common, still continued to be very linear in form. This form went hand in hand with the papyrus roll (Bolter 104).

According to Bolter, papyrus suited this linear form of writing quite well. Papyrus, because it is a linear form of paper that must be scrolled through downwards, must be read in a linear fashion of literally scrolling through a passage. It is no question why the best suited writing style for this type of writing space was a linear style of writing. After the invention of the paged book however, there was a true change. While linear writing still continued to be the dominant form of writing, some authors took advantage of this new writing space and started to emphasize the text in new ways. Bolter says that, “It became more common to make hierarchical structures visible on the page by using different letter sizes and forms as well as different colors of ink, a trend reinforced with the invention of printing” (Bolter 105). An easy example of this is the table of contents a reader sees at the beginning of every book: a simple “hierarchical description of the contents of the book” (Bolter 105). Today we have many examples of works that are still linear in form, but hierarchical in structure, for example, articles. These articles could be anything from a breaking news story to science fiction, but most articles while still following a linear story telling pattern, use many hierarchical structures such as changing the colors of the text, bold headings, paragraph size and spacing, and page orientation to guide, yet interest the reader (Bolter 105). Keep in mind that this hierarchal system still defines the “professional activity of academic writers” (Bolter 105). This type of structure is more than a matter of style. According to Bolter, “both scholarly and scientific writing must me nonfiction in a hierarchical-linear form” in order for this structure to be taken seriously (Bolter 105).

Today as an audience, we think of the digital network as a brand new and involved writing space. However, Bolter suggests that the idea of a “network” has been in place since the Homeric age. Today, a network is a group of related, organized information that we can access online, but it wasn’t always like this. He proposes that Homeric oral poetry is an example of this networking that is older than writing itself. This particular network was established by the “repetition in the minds” of both the poet, along with the audience. These ancient stories contained mythological tales and it was the poet’s duty to draw upon the network of this knowledge to tell his or her story. After the invention of writing in the ancient world, the writer again would draw upon this “networked knowledge” and it was the responsibility for both the readers and writers to read between the lines of the text. This inner “networking” can literally rise to the surface of text when it is a part of a web page. Bolter tells us that there are certain “hotspots” on a webpage that can become animated at the simple touch of a mouse click: hypertext. By “scrolling” on such a webpage (think back to the ancient writing on papyrus) the reader can travel though these virtual pages. According to Bolter, it is still more likely for a reader to follow a linear fashion and click the link to the next page, rather than clicking some link in the middle of the page (Bolter 106). This example of networking becomes visible in a way that was never before possible with the use of the Internet.

It is no question that over the past two hundred years, the form of linear writing has continued to dominate writing. Even so, there have been many writers, a group of “antiauthors” that have tested the boundaries of linear writing. One well-known influential teacher and antiauthor was Wittgenstein. Yet, he published little in his lifetime and agonized over the task of writing. When he did write, he wrote short, disconnected paragraphs that forced his readers into a state of confusion, while they made their way through his disjointed works. Wittgenstein did not want to collect his thoughts into a linear work. He wanted to write exactly as he thought, this of course not being a sequential, or linear form. “Because Wittgenstein could not cast his philosophy in linear-hierarchical form, it had to remain a journey through a network of interrelated topics” (Bolter 108). Wittgenstein’s Philosophical Investigations was finally published, but not in the classic linear manner. Each entry was numbered in the hope of guiding readers through its pages, but diagrams were also needed in an attempt to help the readers make their way through the complicated philosophical documents. Wittgenstein rejected the linear argument, but still followed the classic “form” of the printed book. Going even further than disrupting the classic linear form of the text, “some poststructuralist writers extended their attack to the typography of the book itself, creating “antibooks” that disrupted the traditional notion of how a book should look and behave” (Bolter 109).

One example of such an antibook was Derrida’s Glas. This particular antibook was divided into two columns of Hegel and a French novelist Genet. “Paragraphs set in and around other paragraphs and various sizes and styles of type gave the page an almost medieval appearance” (Bolter 109). Even though there was no linear argument, the reader’s eye would be drawn around the page looking for visual and verbal connections. Bolter suggests that in Glas, “Derrida laid down a textual space and challenged his reader to find a path through it” (Bolter 109). Derrida stretched the boundaries of writing, as would a digital form of writing. While one may think that the extinction of the linear form of writing would be the end of books, think again. Bolter says, “Another possibility is that digital media might refashion the book in a way that enhances the possibilities of multiple presentation without eliminating the book’s cultural significance” (Bolter 110). While in Glas these connections were hidden in the text, the web creates a space where these relationships simply float on the surface.

Now we find digital technology being used to give text a new form of “typography”. Bolter tells his readers that texts always go through a form of typography as it moves from one writing space to another (Bolter 110). One example is the change in Greek literature. Bolter tells his readers that Greek literature has evolved from the papyrus roll, to codex, and then to the printed book. “When we read a paperback edition in English of Plato’s dialogues or Greek tragedies, we are aware of the translation from ancient Greek to a modern language” (Bolter 110). It is important for readers to still be aware of the original translation and the style of writing of the ancient Greeks. The original ancient Greek text had “no book or scene divisions, paragraphing, indices, punctuation, or even word division” (Bolter 110). The transfer of ancient, or even modern texts to a digital form is another example of these translations.

In the 1990s, the Internet became the most popular and economically favorable form of communication. The ability to use “hypertext,” has refashioned the way that authors can write and post online. For example, “instead of one linear argument, the hypertext could present many, possibly conflicting arguments” (Bolter 112). The Internet is not only responsible for redefining the standards of simply text, but “also graphics design, photography, film, and television” (Bolter 113). One does not usually think of the Internet as a new space to fashion essays, but one does think of it as a place to redefine the standards of multimediated writing. The quickly changing digital writing space is easily seen in the classroom. Our generation started out learning to read and write with no technological support, but now we find ourselves immersed in the new world of digitally printed works. The generation of children in elementary school now, only a few short years later, find themselves learning to read and write with so many more digital tools. It is remarkable how fast this digital space is changing the learning process.

After using many different forms of technology to aid learning in the classroom, I find that it has been beneficial for students. Bolter adds that technology in the classroom is not simply kept for the learning process of reading and writing. “Many have even come to regard the networked classroom as a means for social or political change, as they combine digital writing with various strategies of cultural critique” (Bolter 114). In this light Bolter suggests that some educators are trying more and more to incorporate technology into their classrooms for more then one reason. While most teachers of writing are still staying true to the classic power of the spoken and written word, there is no question that incorporating certain technologies can be a great asset to students. With the help of the technology of computers, students can now sit is a classroom, dorm room, in the same building, or across the world, and have a conversation, or edit each other’s works. Bolter asserts that this technology is not meant to replace, but complement learning. This complementing of learning, along with the “refashioning of dialogues,” shows how writing has changed over time. As technology continues to progress, there is no doubt that the way in which we write and perceive writing will continue to change with it.


Bibliography:

Bolter, J. David. Writing Space: Computers, Hypertext, and the Remediation of Print. 2nd ed. Mahwah, NJ: Lawrence Erlbaum Associates, 2001. Print.

Link to Chapter 6 Prezi

http://prezi.com/f3p8kr9zbxo6/copy-of-chapter-6-refashioned-dialogues/

This is the link for our prezi to chapter 6 of Bolton's, Writing Space.

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Chapter Three Bolton Presentation

Observe:
This presentation showed a blue background with white text. There was a good use of quotes from Bolton along with visual aids such as youtube videos and hyperlinks. It was very helpful to see these hyperlinks in working form going directly to webpages we all know and visit. It had a good organizational flow throughout this presentation that made it very understandable for the audience. There was some minor spelling errors on the presentation that probably could've been fixed, but overall it was understandable.

Infer:
This prezi discussed the difference between text and hypertext along with contrasting books and web pages. The definition of hypertext was stated, along with how hypertext is used in webpages. It was shown how hyperlinks can be used to move through different things and places online. According to Bolton, hypertext can enhance a reader's experience while reading.

Question:
     1. Is using hypertext always a benefit to a reader?
     2. Can hypertexts be distracting?
     3. Can hypertext be found anywhere else then on a webpage?
     4. What did you want your audience to take away from this chapter?
     5. Is the digital age taking away from classic writing?
     6. Is it necessary to have hypertexts when reading things online?

Chapter Five Bolton Presentation

Observe:
There was a good use of different colored and sized text. This made the presentation much more interesting to look at and pay attention to. I though there was a good use of arrows to draw your eyes towards different quotes. The set up of the 'prezi' was very interesting to the audience, made it easy to follow the information - good facts, easy to relate to. I enjoyed the comic video showing some differences between classic paperback books and ebook readers. There was a good use of information showing how writing and reading has changed, pulling this information to be understandable to us an an audience. I felt that there was definitely more straights then weaknesses, it started a lot of good discussions and gave good understandable information.

Infer:
It was discussed how we are actually going back to the classic "codex" or even the papyrus scroll. How we "scroll" on ebook readers or ipads or kindles is similar how one would read a scroll. Bolton argues that the ebook could be more "authentic" to the writer. It is the "call" of the writing world to create one great book - gave way to the encyclopedia. Hyperlinks are now used to make the internet "one giant encyclopedia". There is now a similarity between libraries and online libraries. It is not as important to have access to a library building, you can find almost everything you need to know in an online library. According to Bolton times are changing and it is no longer necessary to have a library building or paperback books.

Questions:
     1. Do you agree that we are going back to "scroll" like reading?
     2. What were you trying to show through your first video showing paperback books vs. ebooks.
     3. Is there truly "one great book"? Will there be ever such a book where you will be able to find everything you need to know?
     4. What is the difference between and encyclopedia and an online database?
     5. Is it getting too easy to find information online?
     6. Do you think that libraries are becoming a mute point?

Chapter Four Bolton Presentation

Observe:
This presentation used the opposite white writing on a black background. There were many quotes from Bolton, a graph, and visual aids. I felt that there could have been a greater use of visual aids and perhaps a video. There was a clear flow of information and understandable quotes. The examples that were used were able to be understood by our audience. If anything there was some repeating of information, but that also could have contributed to a greater understanding. It wasn't as visually stimulating as I would have liked, I felt that they could have taken more of an advantage of 'prezi'.

Infer:
This chapter of Bolton's book discussed how writing spaces today are getting back to the classic medieval ways. There were images on this 'prezi' that showed the audience how this was so. In our society we are stimulated by many visuals in our newspapers, magazines, and in online articles. In the electronic age, text is becoming more and more visual. Reading things online is not simply reading an article anymore, we are constantly being bombarded with visual and alternate forms of information. Overall the use of more visual media is getting more and more visually stimulating. We are moving further away from "classic" text and moving more towards a visual and media filled age.

Questions:
     1. Why did you set up a white text and a black background for your quotes?
     2. What were you trying to have the audience take away from this presentation?
     3. Do you agree with how Bolton feels about our society's change in visual aid back towards a more "medieval" feel?
     4. Will the future continue to change our way of reading and seeing visual aids?
     5. What is your definition of a visual aid? Can it have any writing?
     6. Will your audience remember your words from your presentation?

Wednesday, March 30, 2011

Freewrite in the Dark... Sorry about the Spelling...

My dad is is the stprryteller in my family. I remember when I was little, he used to always tell those stories of "when I was achild...".  One particular story I remenber is when he was about ten years old playing with his brother, my uncle PAul, their backyard in New Jersey. Ass typicalolder brothers do, Pual dared my dad to climb the tree to the very top. If he didnt, he was a "chicken".  My dad said that he did indeed climb that cherry trtee, but when he reached the highest branch and looked down at his shocked brother, he saw the height and lost his ballense. He fell from the tree and landed on his arm and broke it. He always used to say that even though he broke his arm, even though he fell, he proved to himself that he could do whatever he he wished to.

As a young girl, I thought this was a wonderful and silly stor that somehow inspired me. Growubg up my dad always pushed me to limb the highest tree and do whatever I dreampt I wanted to do. Im my young state of mind, I thought that proving that he could climb the highest ttree to his brother was such a brave thing for my dad to do. I strived to be able to do whatever I felt I wanted to, and not be afraid to slimp, fall, and get hurt, becasue I knew I caould  always pick myself up and dust myself off, and mix it. Everyone falls sometimes, but what matters is the desision to get back up.

Monday, March 28, 2011

The Changes in Writing Space - Bolton Question

How does this electronic space refashion its predecessor? How does it claim to improve on print's ability to make our thoughts visible and to constitute the lines of communication for our society?


I feel that electronic writing spaces refashion the way that we as the reader process the text we are reading. One of the benefits of technology is the ease and speed: when reading a certain text, or researching online, it is easier to access the infomation than finding it in a library. Technology as a whole, but especially computers and online texts, are much more visually stimulating than printed texts in most cases. When reading online, your brain is stimulated by many more aspects than a single piece of black and white paper. For example, when reading texts online, there are sometimes links to other sites, or videos to enhance comprehension or learning. 


Classic printed works may seem to be dwindling, but they are not as scarce as some may think. Electronic writing spaces claim to improve what we all have stacked in our bookshelves and learn from in classes. As students, we learn how to learn from what we read. If one is used to reading from classic printed texts, they may find it more distracting to read and learn from a computer. As a society of learners we are changing towards a more technological type of learning. It is very rare to not see some form of technology, of not use technology as a writing or reading tool in any classroom today.

Sunday, March 27, 2011

Bolton: Chapter Two Response

In chapter 2 of Bolton's Book "Writing Space", in the section titled the Economics of Writing, Bolton discusses how the "economy" of writing and writing materials has evolved over time. The earliest forms of writing economics were in Mesopotamia and Egypt, where inscriptions were written into clay, papyrus and stone. In the Middle Ages, parchment "provided a more durable and more attractive writing surface then parchment papyrus". Paper was slowly introduced in the later half of the Middle Ages. Although it was not as strong as parchment, it was an easier form to mass produce for reading and writing materials.

Today we have computers, white boards, lines paper, and other forms of "writing surfaces" at our fingertips. As soon as a new form of technology appears in the form of a writing space, it seems another is right behind. Electronic and digital writing spaces are yet again replacing "classic" form of writing spaces. Electronic writing spaces can serve as more then just a literal "space to write", they can be a calendar, scheduler, or a note pad. The classic book is being m"refurbished" into its electronic state. What will out new form of Writing Space be? Only time will tell....

Monday, March 21, 2011

And What Do You Mean?

I agree with what "Sample P" is expressing. When creating a visual argument, it is important to use "time" and "space", as Kress says, to show what is being argued. If a bunch of random pictures were thrown up on the screen, there would be no way for an audience to understand what is going on. The thing about our presentations, where that they all seemed to need a little background explanation. Almost every person needed to say a few words and explain what they "meant" to say in their montage. I think the beauty of a strict visual montage is the imagination that is involved. I feel that the whole point of a visual argument is the ability for the audience to be involved on another level. they need to be able to interpret the visuals into the argument that is expressed by the author. I agree that at the same point, words can be misunderstood while, as the old saying goes, a picture say a thousand words.

Ink Shedding on "Stitch Bitch"

Quote: "I think we will: just because I advocate dispersal doesn't mean I'm as impressed by a pile of sawdust as I am by a tree, a ship, a book."
- Shelly Jackson

I found this particular quote from Shelly's article "Stitch Bitch" very confusing. After ink shedding, we thought that sawdust could be considered the remains or the beginning of the metaphorical "tree", "ship", or book. These objects are all connected in their core materials. A tree, ship, or book is more extensive and impressive then a pile of sawdust. I believe Shelly is showing that by creating constrains in writing, it is similar to this metaphorical transformation of dust into a book.


Saturday, March 19, 2011

Bolton: Chapter One Response

In the first chapter of Jay David Bolter's book "Writing Space", he begins by saying how the first forms of the written Bible were thought to have a great effect on human thought. The "written word" in any form is preserved, and therefore has a more solid impact on the minds of people and on their culture. It was originally thought that once written in book form, the "truths" within would be indisputable, but this was not the case. People still continued to question, read, and write on their own. Printing presses, which made way for computers, have made it easier for people to distribute what they want to teach and the Internet has opened a whole new world for digital communication.

Now it is not so much the question of written, or typed, but printed, or digital. What form of writing will last through time? We have already lost a lot of our dependence on books; electronic devises have in some cases made it too easy to find information outside the library. It is not all about ease, but also about mental stimulation. Digital devices such as computers,  make it easy for users to combine a variety of visual stimulants to stay attentive for longer periods of time. The "voice of the text" and the "visual and conceptual space" of writing is being changed as we move forward. Bolter explains this very well when he explains how we think of browsing the internet as taking a virtual "trip" and "exploring" different sites. As a reader, one makes a connection with the "writing space" in order to interact with it. In any technique used, from writing in literal stone to typing on a computer, our process of interpretation is changed by our writing space.

Wednesday, March 16, 2011

What is this Blogging Thing Anyway?

As someone who has never blogged previous to this class, I find it a new and exciting experience. Sometimes I find that I rush to post something just to get it done, but other times when I am interested in expressing my thoughts, it can be a very interesting way to do so. Blogging is unlike any other type of writing forum - people say what they mean to say, write the way they speak, and add a humorous and artsy flair that can be lost amongst the jumble of academic essays we prepare as students for professors frequently for class.

Would I ever blog away from the academic classroom? I'm honestly not sure. Sometimes I feel like it is still a little too much work for me to write and stay interesting to the readers out there in cyberspace.

Sunday, March 13, 2011

Taylor Mali - Spoken vs. Written Word

After watching Taylor Mali's live performance of the word poem "Like..you know", the written version of the same poem didn't resonate with the same effect for me. I thought that Mali saying the words how he wrote them put forth a much stronger message for the reader or audience member. I was surprised at how much of a difference it made to hear the words spoken, compared to reading them. I found myself laughing while watching the video of Mali reciting his word poem, and not finding as much humor while simply reading the words myself. I find that I as an audience member responded more to the "performance" and humor than just reading the words.

Shelly Jackson Paragraph Respones

"We like to make statues of ourselves. The Greeks marched ever more perfect bodies out of antiquity, slim vertical columns, like a line of capital I's, a stutter of self-assertion. But works of words are self-portraits too, substitute bodies we put together, then look to for encouragement. Boundaries of texts are like boundaries of bodies, and both stand in for the confusing and invisible boundary of the self. The wholeness of an artwork helps firm us up; in its presence we believe a little more in the unity we uneasily suspect we lack. As a result we have an almost visceral reaction to disorderly texts. Good writing is clear and orderly; bad writing inspires the same kind of distaste that bad grooming does, while experimental novels are not just hard to read, they're anti-social. Proper novels are duplicate bodies to the idealized ones we have in our heads, the infamous "thin person struggling to get out." They're good citizens, polite dinner guests."


In this first paragraph I chose from Stitch Bitch: the patchwork girl, written by Shelly Jackson, Jackson describes how we, not only as people, but as writers, create statues of ourselves. The author creates a simile between the Greek warriors and the simple letter "l", all standing in columns in the "correct" way to write. Jackson explains how we ourselves, as well as our writing, are always contained in an "invisible boundary of the self". This "self" can be whatever a writer wants it to be, but it creates a barrier to the writing process in the sense that "good" writing is easy to read, orderly, and inspirers readers, while bad writing can be more difficult to read or not exciting for the reader.


"Reality thinks it "includes" fiction, that fictional works are embedded in reality. It's the boast of a bully. But just because reality's bigger doesn't make it boss. Every work of art is an alternate "world" with other rules, which threatens the alibi of naturalness our ordinary reality usually flaunts. Every fictional world competes with the real one to some extent, but hypertext gives us the chance to sneak up on reality from inside fiction. It may be framed as a novel, yet link to and include texts meant to be completely non-fictional. Thus the pedigreed facts of the world can be swayed, framed, made persuaders of fiction, without losing their seats in the parliament of the real, as facts tend to do when they're stuck in a novel. Hypertext fiction thus begins to turn around and look back on reality as a text embedded in a fictional universe."


In this second paragraph, Jackson explains how fiction is not truly embedded in reality. He says that every work of art is a type of fiction or an "alternate world" of reality. The use of some factual text or nonfictional knowledge in writing (such as dates, events, locations, names, or time periods) makes it easier for a reader to lose his or herself in this new world. Jackson states that every "real" world competes with every fictional world, but the ability to "sneak up" on reality from inside fiction. This makes fictional novels seem more realistic and exciting to read.

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Monday, March 7, 2011

Shift in the Words - The Problem with Describing Trees

In the poem "The Problem of Describing Trees" by Robert Hass, he switches his argument about midway through the poem, "And the tree danced. No. The tree capitalized". The beginning of his poem is describing specifics points about a tree; the aspen glitters in the wind, the leaf flutters protecting the cells drying out in the heat if summer, while the ending of the poem contradicts itself saying that language has limits to describing a tree, or anything within poetry.

I think the author was trying to show how important language is and how it can be changed. Especially when the author writes, "It is good sometimes for poetry to disenchant us", he shows that language can be interpreted in many ways by a reader as well as a writer.

Monday, February 28, 2011

Three Images of Writing

Beating Heart / Stabbing Heart:
I feel every writer experiences some form of internal 'heart attack' prior to, or during the writing process. The beating heart represents a fear to be good enough, to be excepted or to even have the ability to write well. In my own writing I always fear that what I have to say will not be accepted or understood in the way I would have wanted. The fear of acceptance and the adrenalin of anticipation is a vert strong emotion. The knives surrounding the heart and stabbing it is a very disturbing and metaphorical image.

Driving a Car Off the Cliff:
The feeling you get when your mind or body seems so disconnected from yourself that you feel like you are heading towards a deep abyss... For a writer, the fear of, or the inability to write something 'well' is the greatest feeling of fear in the world. Writers can literally feel like if they can't create something great they deserve to metaphorically 'fall of a cliff', and in some cases literally. This image is terrifying, especially as a last resort for true inspiration.

Throwing Writing Away in a Deep Pit:
I find that sometimes if I don't feel content with my writing, all I want to do is throw it away and never look at it again. This metaphor showcases the stereotypical feeling of wanting to bury your regrets or failed accomplishments in that whole in the back yard. This image also shows the want of being able to literally dispose of ideas, which is simply not a possibility. Once an idea crossed one's mind, good or bad, it is next to impossible to dispose of it.

A Sentence Starts Out Like...

A sentence starts out like a raindrop,
That first one falling from that cloud that just couldn't hold on any longer
It may splash down on someone's unsuspecting head and trigger an emotion from contempt to joy.
One may cower and run from the truth,
Or indulge in the splashing of puddles

As the words continue, like the clouds rolling by
It may not seem so bad after all,
No one has melted from raindrops, but many have slipped and fallen
Hold your head high they say to young children,
Don't fear thunderstorms

Text as Image

A cell phone is a "phone" isn't it? I find myself texting so much more than having an actual phone conversation with someone. I think because our generation is used to such a fast paced and instant world of communication, especially with the internet, that a 'text' as an 'image' makes perfect sense. Instead of having to wait through the babble of small talk with someone just to ask a simple question, or keep lines of conversation open throughout the busy day, texting has its benefits. I find it is much easier to glance at a text and shoot back a quick response than have to worry about a long conversation.